Sunday, April 19, 2015

U.K parliament approves three-way mitochondria manipulation, which can prevent unborn babies from having mitochondria diseases


  • The United Kingdom parliament voted on a plan that allows British researchers to change the unhealthy mitochondria cell of mother's egg to a healthy one so that the newborn will be mitochondria disease free.
  • The vote results were 382 to 128
  • Some scientists argue ethical issues and questions about safety


    The UK parliament approved a controversial science advancement. The three-parent mitochondria gene therapy will assure that a newborn will be born without mitochondria disease. The three-parent term is used, because the scientists will need a woman and a man's cell. Then they need another woman's cell that does not have a faulty mitochondria. This way the baby will be free from the disease and still genetically related to the parents as the nucleus of the cell remains intact.







There are safety concerns raised over the topic. The government is agreeing on a very controversial topic. There are questions of ethical issues. There are questions over safety issues. There are also questions about possible new diseases and problems that the newborn baby might encounter, because of the gene change. 



The three source I analyzed were AAAS, BBC, and theGuardian. Out of the three sources, BBC was the best source, while AAAS was the worst out of the three. All of the sources had the same phrasing of words and story.


The article by AAAS has a picture of mitochondria before the text. The headline of the article is not as detailed, unless the reader knows what the term, three-parent mitochondrial gene therapy, in the headline means.  The article does not contain any more visual aid. The first paragraph after the headline explains what exactly the United Kingdom’s House of Commons voted in. It explains in short how exactly the genetic exchange works. The article then expresses the mixed viewpoints from two scientific experts. One of them was against it, saying that it was a mistake. The other was delighted saying it is a scientific breakthrough. The article then explains more about the genetic exchange. Finally, the article talks about how the ethical and scientific reviews supports this practice.

The article was really boring to read. If one was scanning the article, he would not be able to gather key points. It does a good job of linking some information. Overall, the article explains the news properly in detail.  


The article by BBC includes a very blunt and non-explanatory headline. The headline says MPs says yes to three-person babies. The headline is targeted for British audience, because not everyone knows what MP is. The headline kind of explains what the process is essentially doing, creating babies through the help of three people. The article starts with a video of Public Health minister outlining and supporting the practice. The article is organized. The first part explains what the voting processes a little bit and happy reaction of people who were affected by the mitochondria disease. Then the article includes two pictures, which help the reader to understand exactly how the process works. At the end of the article, it talks about the safety concerns of the practice.

This article does a really good job of covering the story. It talks about the voting process, the scientific process, and the safety concerns. The visual aid helps someone who does not know about the topic to understand exactly how the mitochondria exchange process will work. Therefore this article does the best job in covering the story

The article by The Guardian starts with a non-explanatory headline. Then there is a video that shows a person announcing the voting results. This article then starts talking about the voting process. The voting process is explained in detail. Then the article brings in the opinion of people. The article seems to be little biased as it touches on the positive of the mitochondria exchange. The article then talks very little about the process of the mitochondria exchange. Then it talks about the statistics of mitochondria disease. Then the article goes on to support the mitochondria exchange.
This article was biased. The article was informative in explaining about the voting process. However, it talks little about the concerns over the process. The article barely includes any text that explains the possible negative effects. Unlike the other two articles, this article does not talk about the safety concern. This article does the worst job in covering all parts of the story.

Things the article should do better on:
  •        More explanatory headline
  •        Include more visual aid
  •       Emphasize on the important points through bold letters, or bullet points
  •       Include links to information about the project
  •        Talk more about the mitochondria exchange process
  •       Give more insight on the safety concerns over the process.

Sunday, March 29, 2015

Two different ways to think about abortion

  Abortion is a one of the controversial topic in today's society. Abortion is termination of human's pregnancy. Women get abortion, because they do not want to give birth to the baby. This controversial topic contains two main sides. One group, pro-life, wants to ban abortion, while the other group, pro-choice, wants to keep abortion legal.





   The first picture is a protest by anti-abortionist. According to this photo, the main idea behind their anti-abortion movement is to "defend life". There are many families who are unable to conceive, and yet people choose to get abortion. More than that, getting an abortion means killing the baby in the woman's womb. They are killing a live fetus that could one day become a healthy living child. Anti-abortionists want to stop abortion.



   The second picture with the data shows what kinds of people get abortions. Almost half of the people who get abortion have income below poverty level. If the mother can barely feed herself, she cannot possibly feed her child. About one out of five abortions are obtained by women in their teens. Teenagers are immature and pregnancy was probably one of their immature mistake, because teens have not completed their education, do not have proper job, nor have the time for their unborn child.



These two picture tell different stories on the topic of abortion. The anti-abortionist picture tells us why people want to ban abortion. They want to save the life of an alive fetus. The data picture tries to justify why women get abortions. 


Wednesday, January 28, 2015

Hello!
My name is Aseem. I have made this e-portfolio for my journalism class. I am a freshman right now. My major is undecided, but I am trying to get into engineering school. I am originally from Nepal, and I moved to United States in the summer of 2009. I like to watch and play soccer. I like to draw. This bio does not really do justice of portraying who I am, but I am happy to make new friends.